Xavier
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Post by Xavier on Oct 5, 2004 21:07:09 GMT -5
I try to make my work more than poems. It is a way ofr puttiing the wisdom of the Lord in a clear and rhythmic form. So please understand that this more than poetry. I took the main qualification that the Lord taught to his disciples to be disciples in the gospels and made it a poem.
Disciple
Train me Lord to be a good disciple Instruct my path to lead me to lead others to you Bless me Lord so I can be a blessing Anoint me Lord that I may be forgiven and able to forgive Shine your Love on me Lord that I may Love my enemies Heal thy wounds for me to be an example of your work Calm the storms Lord to give me faith that you are with me Increase my strength Lord that I may carry my cross to serve you Give me sight and understanding Lord to read the signs of your Coming Raise me Lord that I may know that you are King
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Post by CoUrTnEy on Oct 6, 2004 11:46:26 GMT -5
Beautifully spoken (written).. i truly enjoyed that one. Keep up the good work!!
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Xavier
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Post by Xavier on Oct 7, 2004 23:19:57 GMT -5
thank you
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Post by 1dell on Oct 7, 2004 23:21:55 GMT -5
I find it so hard to write poems like that. I admire you bro. I find it easier to write about my woman than my Lord
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Xavier
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Post by Xavier on Oct 7, 2004 23:26:01 GMT -5
thanks. did you get my email to you. I have been trying write on the Israel portal and poetry portal and it says that I am banned. help a brother out.
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